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Halfway Through, A Writing Tip, and A New Focus

WOW, guys and gals!

Guess what I reached last week? That's right, 50% of my novel Rise of a Heroine: Resurgence! I'M AT 50%!!! HALFWAY THROUGH! I might not be done with it, but I count this as a big win. It's the farthest I ever got in a novel of mine, so this is huge. But also quite motivating and humbling, since it's proof of how I can succeed at this. I'm longing for the first draft. Speaking of draft, here's a picture of my thick baby printed out (of course, it's half of it since that's what I got but still it's pretty good, right?):

Thick Book(Copyrighted by Catherine Girard-Veilleux, 2020)

Honestly, this book baby of mine is ENORMOUS. It has 294 pages, imagine that! Need I remind you that's only… half of it?!

Here's the awesome cover my best friend made for me on Inkitt: 

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You can read the first 8 chapters here, too.

I always use Staples to print my books (or my progress at least) and I love their services. It's always ready in a day no matter how long or thick my document might be.

I prefer to print it out to edit it so I can see it better. But the truth is I hate to concentrate and narrow my eyes at the screen when revising; I prefer to hold the pages in my hands, and feel the book-in-the-making, you know? So it makes it more authentic, more real to me. But funny story is that due to its thickness, the rings for the binding I wanted weren't available; they were too small! So I had to pick my least favorite option, which is the ugly and large black plastic binding. Talk about chic… Anyways, at least I could choose a red cover. I don't know why but red always makes me think of Miranda Kane, probably because she's a boxing athlete and most boxing gloves are red. Or because she's fierce so red fits her. Either way, I'm glad I could get the red cover and the protective transparent cover. 

Now, why would it need editing since it's halfway through? Well, I've noticed a few anomalies in how boxing works, mostly for students. I had a kind and generous interview with the head/director of the Fédération québécoise de boxe olympique, which is the reference in Québec. I thank him immensely for that. He informed me about how things worked and even used Miranda and her story as an example to describe her path. He was amazing and so understanding! Thanks to him, I now have essential information about the female boxing world and in general. So, due to these discrepancies, I decided to go over the half book I wrote and revised, fixing a few chapters and inconsistencies with the reality. Then, and only then, will I be able to go forth and write more realistically. Because something big is coming for Miranda Kane, and I have to be ready too, you know? 

I have a strange way of writing books (which I'll make a post about), but in general, I write the story, then at a point when it feels critical and I'm moving through quicksand, I stop writing for weeks and do research instead about what's not coming qwell too me in the writing, so I do interviews and read documentaries (even watch a few!) and so on. But while I like to be familiar with the topic when I start writing, it's never to a deep point, it's on the surface. And when I can't go forward anymore, that's when I take a step back and do research. I found it helps me see more potential for a story and even gives me more excitement as I find so many new avenues for the story to go. Okay, it might cause more rewriting, of course, but overall, it doesn't bog me down in the beginning and prevent me from going ahead with the writing for fear of not knowing never never never enough. So many people stay in the research stage out of fear of committing to writing. Research is fun, don't get me wrong, I love research. But I prefer writing my stories. So I hit a compromise: write a certain percentage of the story and when I can't go on anymore because too many details elude me, then do research, and dig deep! Then with a better view of it all, come back and win!! Write it all in a fury with a deep passion like fire is after me. Because I'm so happy I get a better grip on the details and on the story world.

So, while unusual and risky, that's exactly how I do it. And so far it's going well, I went farther than any other novel I started. So I'll keep it, thank you very much.

By the way, I decided to focus my blog, Ad Librum Aeternam, more on my writing journey and writing tips because I feel I've got tips to give now being halfway through my novel, which is more than some achieve. I have two series of posts coming up as well: one is on writing comics and the second is on screenwriting. I think there's not enough free resources about these two fields and since I love them and am writing in them in my spare time, I figured we could go on these two journeys together. Of course, writing novels, short stories and flash fiction stay the main focus of my blog. Expect more writing tips along the way! 

I can't wait to share with you  what I learned so far!

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Waiting For Achilles: A Book Review

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Black Lawrence Press

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By Jo Sarzotti

Genre: Poetry

Pages: 59

ISBN: 9781625570017

Format: Paperback

Publication date: 2019

Publisher: Black Lawrence Press

Type: Book, Poetry Collection

 

*I received a free paperback copy in exchange for an honest review. No compensation has been given and I write this book review willingly. A big thanks to Black Lawrence Press and Diane Goettel!*

 

Introduction

This book was recommended to me on Goodreads by none other than… the publisher! Yes, Black Lawrence Press added me as a friend, followed my reviews and sent me this recommendation. I couldn’t help adding Waiting for Achilles to my “Want to read” list and, desperate for a review copy of this poetry collection, I contacted them. Graciously, they granted me a copy. I’m so thrilled to have read this raw, moving and mythical-inspired poetry book!

So, not only is the cover gorgeous and quite relevant to the topics explored, the book is entertaining and deep with meaning.

Let’s delve into it together, shall we?

 

Blurb

A beautiful poetry collection inspired by many truths of life such as death, heartbreaks, joys, as well as Greek mythology. The theme of horses is a current that helps tie the poems together all while exploring different sides to reality and the fine line between myth and dreams and life.

 

The Positive Sides

I liked the continuous theme of horses, mostly black ones, throughout the poems. It felt unifying and helped put the poems in motion and dig into their meanings. It also felt like Ariadne’s string in Greek mythology.

The poem that stood out the most to me is “Abduction by a God”, which retells the story of Perspephone being abducted by Hades. Not only is it my favourite mythological story (yeah, I know, weird), the words chosen, the images depicted, and the rhythm just got to me. “Hospital Mind” is another one that got under my skin, but because of its sadness I can relate to as someone who spends a good chunk of my life in hospitals due to serious health issues. The emotions, feelings and descriptions are accurate and echo in me. “Fear of Drowning” is dark and angsty, heart-breaking because we’ve all been there too, with a broken heart, no matter its type. “Woman in Space” is entracing, beautiful, and speaks of feminism to me—or a lack of it. As for “Norse Mythology”, I rather enjoyed the Trickster (Loki), the Ourobouros, and the vikings. It made me grin and nod with approval, which is a good reaction to a poem. Lastly, “The Shoemaker’s Wife” describes the way we care about doing our duty, whatever it may be like the shoemaker’s wife (to be clear, I’m talking about picking up shoemaking herself), and how we have to cross boundaries to do it and succeed.

Of course, there are several interesting poems other than these I mentioned, but I figured sharing my experience was a good way to make you feel them, too. A bit, at least. The last positive point I’ll bring up is how loosely connected these poems sound to one another. It’s a tenuous strong, linking them all, but it’s there. And I think it’s amazing to see this subtle connection at play.

 

The Negative Sides

While all the poems are interconnected, forming an ensemble, the words and meanings are often separated and hard to grasp. It’s almost like they’re unrelated for the most part. I understand the free nature of poetry, as I write some myself, but this goes beyond seamless connections and transitions.

 

In Conclusion

For the sheer enjoyment I had reading this poetry collection (and look at that gorgeous cover!) as well as the difficulty of grasping a few of them, I give Waiting for Achilles a rating of 4 out of 5 stars. I plan on re-reading it down the road of my life and choose to keep it in my personal library. It’s a nice addition, deep, sometimes dark, always honest. I enjoyed the ride on Achilles’s black horse and gladly recommend this poetry collection to poetry readers, poets, mythology lovers, Greek world lovers, and those looking for diverse poems about other things than simply heartbreaks and love matters that seem to plague a lot of our contemporary poetry.

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If you want to learn more about the author, you can visit her page on Black Lawrence Press's Web site. You can also add Waiting for Achilles to your bookshelves on Goodreads and LibraryThing.