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New Project & NaNoWriMo 2015

Hello, folks!

I have a good update to tell you: I am starting a new project.

I am currently writing multiple short stories and I intend on making an eBook out of them for you to grab and read. 🙂 Isn’t it just fun?! It will include short stories of all length, perhaps even a few flash fictions.

I would love to share an excerpt with you, but let’s keep the surprise ;)…

Does any of you have good Web sites to make eBook covers?

Thank you.

If you have any input or questions about this project, please, do leave me a comment. I’ll be more than happy to answer!

Moreover, I have decided to enter NaNoWriMo again this year, and so I joined the October Prep group on Writing.com. This is a group where we prepare ourselves for NaNoWriMo through little activities and brainstorming, and even some contests! It’s good old fun, if you ask me. 🙂

On this, I wish you a very good evening (or day)!

You’ll hear more about it throughout October as I post fun facts about my characters and in November some excerpts from the actual story.

Thank you for reading me.

See you at the next post!

New Project & NaNoWriMo 2015

Hello, folks!

I have a good update to tell you: I am starting a new project. I am currently writing multiple short stories and I intend on making an eBook out of them for you to grab and read. 🙂 Isn't it just fun?! It will include short stories of all length, perhaps even a few flash fictions. I would love to share an excerpt with you, but let's keep the surprise ;)…

Does any of you have good Web sites to make eBook covers? Thank you. If you have any input or questions about this project, please, do leave me a comment. I'll be more than happy to answer!

Moreover, I have decided to enter NaNoWriMo again this year, and so I joined the October Prep group on Writing.com. This is a group where we prepare ourselves for NaNoWriMo through little activities and brainstorming, and even some contests! It's good old fun, if you ask me. 🙂

On this, I wish you a very good evening (or day)! You'll hear more about it throughout October as I post fun facts about my characters and in November some excerpts from the actual story. Thank you for reading me. See you at the next post!

Saint Patron

Hello, everyone!

Did you know that I have a Patreon account? Yes! You can support my writing and painting!
Isn’t it awesome?
You can donate as low as one dollar.

It would mean a lot to me if you would fund me, please. It would help in keeping me going at what I do best: write and paint!

Become my saint Patron.

Here is the link: www.patreon.com/CatGV?ty=h

Also, if you want to take a look at my art, here it is 😀 : TheStoryKate

Thank you, lovelies!

On the Publishing Path!

As you know, fellow writers, I’m the winner of Camp NaNoWriMo 2014.

That same story (Down to Earth) I’ve won with is now at the publishing stage. I need help to see my dream come true as I cannot make the future payments, having already made two of $500.

Please, take a look at my fundraising and share the word. It would mean the world to me.

My story of acceptance and finding your inner powers might just help someone. So help me in my endeavor to entertain and help people.

Thank you very much.

Here is my Kickstarter: Down to Earth

(You can leave me any comments or questions you have about my project; I will gladly answer :))

You can read the prologue to my novel on the Kickstarter page.

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For those of you who want to contact me, here is my author Facebook page: Catherine-Girard-Veilleux

Or you can leave me a comment on here. 🙂

Thank you.

My Comeback

Hello, folks!

I have three good news for you:

  • I am back and happy to be so,
  • A publishing house has accepted to publish my novel Down to Earth (YES! You have read well!),
  • I am sharing my writing portfolio with you for your entertainment.

Yes, FriesenPress is going to publish my book this year. Only 8 chapters and a bit of editing are left to do. I am so excited! I use Scrivener and pens and paper to write it. You, what do you usually use?

Here is my writing portfolio for you to enjoy :): GypsyHeroWoman

I’d appreciate it if you could leave a review on a writing of your choice. It will help me improve. Thank you very much.

😀

I am so happy!

An Emotional Flash Story (Writing Prompt: ”I’m going to be a star.”)

‘’I’m …going t-to… be a s-star, Laney.’’

Coughing blood and numbness gradually taking over his body, Nathan still wanted to make that important point matter. It was mostly all he had ever lived for – being a star. Hands trembling and the red liquid running down his mouth to stain his shirt in every way possible, the 13-year-old boy tried his best to smile, both wanting to soothe his sister and himself. He was feverish, lying on the cold ground, probably the pavement (he didn’t really remember…). He couldn’t feel his legs, as though they had been removed, but caught every sobbing echoing near him as well as his sister’s arms locked tightly around his body, her tears falling onto his whitening face. He was so tired… so tired. His eyelids carried the heaviness of the world. But he didn’t mind, not now, no… Nathan’s gaze fixed upon the fading sky, he smiled proudly and nervously – his biggest moment was here, he knew it. A star-shaped beam of white light just like the spotlight of a scene appeared before his eyes, but he wasn’t afraid. With a feeble ‘’I told you…’’, Nathan’s world turned black and his body went limp, exhaling his last breath like a comedian utters his last line, bowing to his fans for the play was over – his life, a Greek tragedy. The people massed around him were his audience, the car, a mere problem to make the story move forward, to show everyone what he was, and the sobbing turned into praise and applause.

They had come to witness the rising of a star.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Catherine Girard-Veilleux

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An Emotional Flash Story (Writing Prompt: ‘ ‘ I ‘ m going to be a star. ‘ ‘ )

‘’I’m …going t-to… be a s-star, Laney.’’

Coughing blood and numbness gradually taking over his body, Nathan still wanted to make that important point matter. It was mostly all he had ever lived for – being a star. Hands trembling and the red liquid running down his mouth to stain his shirt in every way possible, the 13-year-old boy tried his best to smile, both wanting to soothe his sister and himself. He was feverish, lying on the cold ground, probably the pavement (he didn’t really remember…). He couldn’t feel his legs, as though they had been removed, but caught every sobbing echoing near him as well as his sister’s arms locked tightly around his body, her tears falling onto his whitening face. He was so tired… so tired. His eyelids carried the heaviness of the world. But he didn’t mind, not now, no…

Nathan’s gaze fixed upon the fading sky, he smiled proudly and nervously – his biggest moment was here, he knew it. A star-shaped beam of white light just like the spotlight of a scene appeared before his eyes, but he wasn’t afraid.

With a feeble ‘’I told you…’’, Nathan’s world turned black and his body went limp, exhaling his last breath like a comedian utters his last line, bowing to his fans for the play was over – his life, a Greek tragedy. The people massed around him were his audience, the car, a mere problem to make the story move forward, to show everyone what he was, and the sobbing turned into praise and applause. They had come to witness the rising of a star.        

 

    Catherine Girard-Veilleux Copyrights, All Rights Reserved.

Upside Down (Short Story… Or Prologue?; My First Excerpt I Promised to You ;))

Upside Down

 

The pitter-tatter of little feet in the hall normally woke her each morning. Today, it was the absence of it.

As Angela worked to flutter her eyelids open, escaping the night’s strong grip as worry kept nagging at her, creeping up her whole body like an unwanted enemy and warning her mind with broken flashes of lucidity. Something was off and it was annoying her. Her brow furrowed as she slowly realized what was going on – or, actually, what was not. Quickly, not minding the dizziness of the sudden move, the brunette propped herself up on her bed with her elbows. Still, she listened closely for any sound at all… but nothing. Now, that was scary! Her heart had started to pump faster as well as her breathing had increased slightly.

Angela didn’t waste time and jumped out of bed, grabbing her light beige and slightly torn jacket and putting it on her yellow nightgown, already running bare feet outside her bedroom. If it were any normal day, she’d have minded the harsh coldness of the tiled ground on her feet – but it wasn’t, so she didn’t. Turning her head in every direction possible, anxiety plain on her face and her hair whipping her cheeks and neck, the 17-year-old girl felt panic rising. This wasn’t normal! No, no! A bit confused at first with where to begin, she finally decided to just run down the huge and long corridor to her left, desperately looking for any sign of life other than her own. Her breathing was getting raspier by the second, sweat beading on her forehead. This wasn’t possible…

Usually, faeries, goblins, imps, elves, and many other magical creatures bustled about the corridors. Every. Early. Morning. It had never failed – until this day. And even though it always made her grumble and sigh, Angela was now missing it cruelly, wishing harder than she ever had before for the noise and excitation to come back. The world seemed almost frozen, slowed to a frighteningly low speed, even inducing a strange sensation of floating and wavering. Her heart thumped against her chest and the air barely seeped in her throat and down to her lungs – perhaps the big lump of stress stuck in her esophagus blocked its full progression. She didn’t even remember she needed to breathe.

Yes, faeries and such. They lived on the first floor, where the brown-haired woman resided. The elves had chosen the fourth floor, whereas the gnomes and goblins preferred the moist scent of the basement. Imps and witches slept on the third floor, and all the others were mixed between the fifth floor and seventh floor as they desired (some even chose to fall asleep under the moonlight and stars, up on the roof where a big bell was mounted – they never used it anymore and most people had forgotten it even existed, much like they did those marvelous beings…) The majestic place she lived in, called the Coven, was an old abandoned place in Italy reconverted into a haven for all which that was magic. Besides her; she was the only exception. Angela was the only human allowed inside its doors. Why? She figured that due to technology, people believed less in what they deemed fantasies, closing their third eyed to the real beauty of the world – no wonder the other humans found it boring, they didn’t even see half of it! Except for Angela: she was one of the rare who still could, and despite their fear and despise for the human race, the creatures had welcomed her with open arms and wings, giving her a home after the fire that destroyed her family. Not only was she grateful, she also didn’t miss the ‘outside’ and took the as family.

Angela, as if suddenly given wings, sprinted down the wide and creamy marble stairs and into a sober, yet impressive hall. Again, the same colour and material everywhere – even the rich-looking benches were made of plain marble! The teenager quickly came to an abrupt stop when she noticed a feminine figure sitting on one of the (uncomfortable) benches in the middle of the room. Her eyes widened with fear and insecurity. The slender blonde slowly turned her face in her direction, her voluptuous heart-shaped lips curving upward with mischief, her thin and perfect legs crossed with her right hand gently cupping her top knee.

‘’Hello, Miracle,’’ said the woman with a grin and a sugary tone of voice that warned of deeper motives. A lock of her hair slid over her cheek, leaving to be seen a beautifully mystical elf-pointed ear.

But why would an elf be here at this hour? They never come down their 4th floor before noon… And who is she?

‘’That’s not my name,’’ Angela replied dryly, hands clenched tightly so as they were turning white, brow furrowed, she was nibbling at her lower lip out of concern.

‘’Oh yes, it is~,’’ cooed the stranger before chuckling. The tall woman stood up, smoothing her light skirt. She shot the young lady a look of two-faced amusement and grinned before calmly and confidently making her way towards the huge wooden doors of the abandoned coven.

I really don’t like her – don’t trust her either. Really, who’s she? Does she even think her acting all mysterious is gonna do the trick!? Hmpf.

‘’Hey! W-wait…!’’ Angela exclaimed, trotting after the woman. ‘’I don’t even know who you are! I’ve never seen you around here… nor anywhere, for that matter!’’

The elf slowed down and put a hand on the right door, gradually opening it as though she had all the time in the world, with only a gentle push it seemed – it was a fact, elves were stronger than humans, indeed! Turning her oval-shaped head only so slightly, she smiled crookedly, shadows playing dangerously over her face due to natural light play. ‘’Then, perhaps it is time you did…’’ On this, the elf slipped outside the building, her chuckling still growing in intensity haunting the hall as it echoed against every wall like a disturbing mantra.

What kind of answer was that?!

Angela gasped then started running after her, awkwardly pushing the door open wider – damn, it was always so heavy! – before freezing right outside the threshold, onto the top of big cement stairs. No one. No noise either. There seemingly wasn’t any soul to be found within the small Italian village nor any hint that could prove a 30-year-old *welf had just exited the Coven. Gaping, with her breathing slowing to a more moderate pace, staring straight before her in blank astonishment. For a town normally buzzing with activity, this sure was peculiar; not even a single sign of life! Nothing. A cold and dry breeze whistled past her, making her long brown hair dance with the wind for a few seconds, accompanied by an eerily shrill sound that whispered to her nothing good. She took in every piece of the odd scenery, now feeling completely unease about it all. Everything had changed by taking a turn for the worst, mainly the ambiance – the houses appeared smaller, crammed together, falling into ruins, and also their colours held a much darker tone, as though gray and dull marine were the new trend.

She trudged for a few feet and halted at the edge of the first step, her incredulous gaze fixed upon the empty and narrow streets. The certainty that something wicked this way came had just established itself  in her whole being, like a dark shadow looming over her, creeping up her every bone and nerve.

What have I gotten myself into?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

* welf: woman-elf

 

Catherine Girard-Veilleux

Copyrights, All Rights Reserved

 

Comeback!

Hello, folks!

I know I’ve quite shone with my absence recently (forgive me, I was sick and still am in University), but I have good news for you:

I’ve just recently entered a writing contest and the due date is November 20, which means you’ll get to read it this week. 😉 First excerpt, then! 😀

Also, don’t worry, new tips are coming your way as well as book reviews.

Thanks for staying with me on this journey.

See you at the next stop!

Jehovah God: Poems to Light the Road to Everlasting Life by Tommy L. Thomas (Book Review)

The actual book

 

I have not been displeased!

This book not only touches one’s soul deeply, but also acts as a presence of God, as if He were patting you on the shoulder, whispering things you needed to hear once again… It can both uplift your mood and make you cry.

Now, I have to say I usually don’t like this sort of books, not because it is bad, but because it makes me feel like the teacher’s pet towards God, although I am a believer and love him. Nevertheless, these last 4 years haven’t been easy on me, particularly that last one, despite everything I’ve been through; I was born with heart malformations and had to undergo a major surgery at 4, then a year later I received a pacemaker that I had to change at 16 (it happens every 9 years). I’ve been told I am quite courageous and always believed God genuinely wanted me back on Earth, after pushing me back into my body thrice on the surgical table. However, I’ve had my best friend die 4 years ago, suffered from many abandons during the same year, horrible heartbreaks, then one of my greatest aunts died, many changes in my life occurred as well as troubles with my father, then another one of my aunts died, my grandma and my favourite great-aunt got dangerously sick. All of this leading to a huge migraine that left me without any memory of my life and impairing me to walk and talk sometimes, suffering from huge pains; I have nightmares, I sleep 3 hours at night when I’m lucky. All of this for 1 year… Let’s just say anger and sorrow have been dining at my table since then. They crashed down my party. I am such in physical and emotional pain and keep talking to God for help and explanations that when I saw the book title, with poetry (what I adore!), I deemed it as an answer and just had to take it… And I am not disappointed!

You see, many who write positive things never really experienced what I lived or dismay deep enough for me to feel compelled and ready to believe them and what they preach. However, in Thomas’ book, we learn he’s been through horrible times as well – differently, you may say, but it has still a huge weight on it (congratulations for having overcome it, by the way! – from another fighter) and that made it all the more touching and his words true and piercing. I won’t lie: I’ve gone to angry, to crying, to grinning. I was battling my own demons when reading it, but I must say it did answer most of my questions… because even though the main topic is God, not only does he vary it, he also dares explore other areas such a Jesus’ crucifixion and his own difficult times, which makes it all seem the more human to me (and a big victory on his side, I must say! Because otherwise I get bored and I got strayed from that monotonous path ;)) I’ve never been fond of Jehovah’s Witnesses seeing as, from what I’ve heard, they would have let me die due to my needing blood transfusions. But, I pushed it aside for the talent and art of this book, and only focused on God and the meaning.

Unfortunately, the biggest flaw it holds is one I despise above all: grammar mistakes. Here, he doesn’t conjugate the verb at the right tense, which makes it sound weird and forces you to re-read. There, he confuses ‘’its’’ for ‘’it’s’’ and the possessive for plural and vice versa. His choice of words is sometimes both amazing and redundant. Also, he mainly uses capital letters whenever a pronoun is related to God, but I’ve noticed some of them got forgotten along the way… A few poetry lines are too long when the last words should have been the start of the next line instead of the end, which grows to be boring and confusing. A few times it sounded too teacher’s pet for me, but was still inspiring, despite the many uses of the same words here and then…

Overall, I really do believe the author should have paid for an editing of his book. Despite all of that unpleasant grammar problem for the trained eye, the book is worth reading and holds many truths as well as being a real roller coaster ride of emotions, trust me. Moreover, his knack of ending sentences with a rhyming verb, mostly in a question, instead of starting with it is fantastic and ingenious! It is quite interesting. Speaking of rhymes, I just love how Thomas made the best use out of them, despite some redundancy (poems have to rhyme for me to be considered good, even enjoyable). His poems are also tinted with questions, which make you introspect and ponder over the words’ meaning as well as how maybe God perceives it all – this is a tactic I am fond of, as if the poem you are reading is actually interacting with you, not only waiting after you to be read, quite a charm, really! That is not all! I greatly appreciated his daring and courage with his work titled ‘’The Last Three Steps and Last Breath of Jesus Christ’’ my favorite poem of Jehovah God since I wasn’t expecting a turn of point of view from God; it was a delightful experience, although genuinely heart wrenching (in a good way) and new. I enjoyed the boldness of the author with such a topic and the chosen words to express Jesus’ thoughts, purpose and life left me speechless. Also, I found his sharing his pains some kind of a ‘blessing’, because most who write such things usually don’t have what I call ‘’hard times’’ whereas most of my life is one, which makes all of his words even more touching and true. The page called ‘’Faith’’, which describes many situations of everyday and troubled life where our faith plays an important role and it feels genuine, forcing you to think about it and agree (it made me smile because this is something I believed in even before reading it, yeti t was amusing to see someone sharing this belief). Finally, the ending (‘’Scriptures to Lift Us’’) is just of a surprising good taste and a thoroughly great idea that won me over and is a must to read just for the sake of it:  the author provides us with a list of excerpts (mostly on where to find them) from the Bible, related to different problematic and painful situations our lives can be made of (I found about 7 topics of high relevance to me in them). It is much thoughtful and caring – I had never seen this before.

If one asked me about this book, I’d tell them the best of it and say that if they need help or reassuring, genuine emotions, then to read Jehovah God:  Poems to Light the Road to Everlasting Life. It’s as if God is holding your hand whilst scrolling down the pages, murmuring to you with a smile, or a serious face, telling you:  ‘’Here, this is what you’ve been looking for – answers.’’ It’s as if you’re accompanied during that time by someone sincere and loving, yet authoritarian but with a good and greater will than we know of.

 

– Reviewed by Catherine G.V., a.k.a Ad Librum Aeternam.