I've got two news for you relating to my novel Rise of a Heroine: Resurgence, a.k.a Miranda Kane (my main character).
So, I'm using Inkitt, a publishing platform similar to Wattpad, to post my novel online and land a publication contract with said platform.
Unfortunately, I've been neglecting it those last few months… BUT FEAR NOT! I am back in the ring with the 7th chapter now posted and ready for you to read!
Also, I made a vow to myself and you that I'd now upload a new chapter on Inkitt every two weeks. So, be prepared (*cue Scar's theme song from The Lion King here*)
Also, if you're wondering why I'm using Melissa Benoist in all my GIFs, it's because of this choice of face claims and here's a bonus graphic.
Remember the blog tour in which I'm taking part? Well, the day has come!
I hope you enjoy I. L. Cruz's touching and insightful guest post about fairytale retellings.
Have fun reading Reimagining the Imaged and don't forget to read to the end for there is an excerpt from her latest book in her Enchanted Isles fantasy series, A Noble's Path.
Reimagining the Imagined: Fairy Tale Retellings
At the time, the moment seemed unimportant. My best friend and I were playing Snow White, but it was understood I wouldnât be Snow White. I didnât question it at the time. I was far from being snowy whiteâI am a dark-skinned Latinaâand my best friend was, so I played the huntsman. It didnât bother me because I never gave it a second thought.
Years later, I was reading fairy tales to my daughter and as an adult I read them with a keener eye than when I was a child. The women were passive and all suffered from some martyr complex. At least the main characters did. It's what started my writerâs journeyâwanting to read something other than what was available.
Those two elements are the basis for my love of fairy tale retellings and why I think they exist. Both the need to see oneself reflected in stories and the feeling that somehow what does exist can be improved upon. Do you like Cinderella but wish she was less subservient and maybe make her Native American or Mongolian? Have you always liked the story of Red Riding Hood, but wished she could save herself? Do you feel the giant was the wronged party considering Jack snuck into his home and stole his harp? All these scenarios are the start of fairy tale retellings.
Fairy tales are like building blocks. They form a rough structure for a more complete story, like writing prompts just begging to be used for a fuller story. And what better way to make the tales from a time so long ago more relevant to modern readers than by making sure a modern audience sees itself in the story. Itâs what gave me the idea for my current series, The Enchanted Isles. Itâs set in a fictional world full of characters from Mother Goose rhymes. The main character, Inez Garza, is an independent and resourceful Latina, who embraces adventures despite not because of her love interest.
And thatâs the fun of fairy tale retellingsâthey allow the reader and the writer to imagine new and exciting ideas set in a story that everyone knows. That way anyone can play Snow White and no one will question it.
A Nobleâs Path: An Enchanted Isles Novel (Enchanted Path Series, Book 2)
By I.L. Cruz
Book Blurb:
Divided loyalties test Inez Garza.
The infamous incident at the Academy of Natural Studies has forced her to work for the Kingâs Men while continuing to serve the hidden market.
Supporting Birthright furthers the cause of Magical Return, but the cost may be the fall of the royal house and losing Zavier forever.
And the strongest pull of all is her growing and erratic magic, which demands everything and offers only destruction in return.
Inez must decide where her loyalties lieâsaving Canto or saving herself.
The Excerpt
The morning dew had given way to a chill humidity. The songbirds that hadnât left for warmer climes started tuning up their whistles and calls. Snow would come early this year. After the usual stifling heat of the hidden market, it felt frigid in the open air. I pulled my coat closer, causing a rustle of Ălizâs list of KM. I had little time to memorize it, but keeping it on me was a great danger. The KM were no kinder to traitors than the hidden market was to theirs.
I reached for the list, but stopped myself when I heard a distinctive footfall behind me.
âHey! What did the Empress want?â asked Jacque, calling the Jabberwocky by his personal nickname for her. He bounced on the balls of his feet, his lithe frame blocking my path.
âHow did you know we talked?â I asked.
His near-perfect teeth shone in a mischievous grin. Jacque was one of the best fences I knew, able to reach out to wealthy clients because of his celebrity status as a stunt performer. It helped that he didnât look like a criminal, with his handsome features. To them his smuggling activities were a sideline, but I knew smuggling was his priority. That acrobatics brought fame, not fortuneânot that money was a problem for him anymore. Delaware Humphreyâs fortune looked good on him. Jacque had traded his patched clothes for custom made. Even for his night gig.
âHow often does the Jabberwocky close the market? About as often as one of her smugglers get pinched to work for the enemy,â was his reply. âI knew the market going dark had to be about you.â He withdrew a miniature blaze burner from his coat pocket and it flared almost instantly. He didnât flinch as his callused fingers caressed the flames.
âAre you waiting for applause? Yes, it was about me. Anyway, shouldnât you be retrieving my egg stash?â I asked.
âAlready done. Youâll see a nice little profit from thatânot that you need it,â he said. Jacque was one of the few smugglers who knew I was the daughter of the second most powerful noble in Canto, right after the royal family. My motherâs title meant I never had to worry about money like most smugglers, but that didnât mean I turned my nose up at extra cash. Funding rebels was expensive.
âI could say the same about you. Have you moved yet?â I asked. Jacque had come into a tidy sum after his half-brother, Delaware Humphrey, was killed.
âNot quite and donât think I havenât noticed you changed the subject. What did the Empress say?â He continued to fiddle with the mini blaze burner.
âIâm suspended until further notice,â I said, not wanting to tell him about my assignment of spying to redeem myself. The other smugglers at the hidden market had been making themselves scarce when I was around. Working with the KM wasnât a way to endear myself with a bunch of mercenaries and thieves. Then it occurred to me that Jacque was still hanging around⌠Why?
I would never have suspected Jacque of spying on me but in that instant it occurred to me. Had he struck some deal with the Jabberwocky? Iâd barely begun my covert operations and was already feeling paranoid.
Book details:
Publisher: Bosky Flame Press Author: I.L. Cruz Cover Artist: Jack Baker Page Count: 236 Word Count: 69,000
ISBN (Digital): 9781732547131 ISBN (Print): 9781732547148 Release Date: January 31, 2020
You can purchase A Noble's Path using this link leading to your favourite bookstore: Buy A Noble's Path
The Author:
I.L. Cruz decided to make writing her full-time career during the economic downturn in 2008. Since then sheâs used her BA in International Relations to sow political intrigue in her fantasy worlds and her MA in history to strive for the perfect prologue. When sheâs not engaged in this mad profession she indulges her wanderlust as often as possible, watches too much sci-fi and reads until her eyes cross. She lives in Maryland with her husband, daughter and a sun-seeking supermutt named Dipper.
Saggy middles, plot points, pinch points⌠Sounds gibberish and scary? Yeah, Iâve been there. Every time I started writing a novel, I had to stop because it was going nowhere. I worked and worked, but nothing substantial came out of it. Until I stumbled upon Jami Goldâs Save the Cat! beat sheet, which led me to the book itself by Jessica Brody.
Its title, Save the Cat!, really achieved what it claims: It saved the Cat (my nameâs Catherine).
The Beat Sheet (Jami Gold)
This beat sheet is marvellous! Not only does it have the titles of each important plot point, with the number of pages on which it should happen no less, it also offers short descriptions of those points! As a newcomer to this method (a year ago), I didnât understand this jargon right away. But the descriptions, damn, did they help me! I figured out what they meant overall and started applying my story to the plot points and⌠magic! I had a workable, substantial storyline; not perfect, mind you, as I still had to learn the whole method, but my story could hold on its own now!
It drastically changed my plotting method. Plotting is my most hated part of writing (I love all others! Yes, even marketing), but now I see it as crucial and even pleasant to see the story form before my eyes and stand on its own. Whenever I have a new book idea, I print the beat sheet and fill it in first thing. It might take a few days, since this is plotting, but it works for me. The Save the Cat! method is a godsend to me!
Now, I mentioned a book, didnât I? Well, Jessica Brody wrote a book about novel writing using the Save the Cat! method. And guess what? Iâm damn glad she did!
It is insightful, helpful and precise. Thereâs little fooling around, and youâve got actionable steps, theory and a lot of examples (yes, beat sheets examples, too!) I purchased it a while ago and I cherish it. I can finally immerse myself in this technique instead of simply âguessingâ like I used to do with only the beat sheet.
Really, give this book a try if youâre like me, stuck on plotting, saggy middles or donât really know what to do with those plot and pinch points⌠Itâll save your novels, too. I can vouch for this!
Jessica Brodyâs course
What if I told you thereâs a course built around this very book? Well, there is! The author is the one offering this course (we lucky champs!) You can access it by paying a monthly membership fee ($12), and itâs full of resources, beat sheets, examples, and clear and precise explanations by the Jessica Brody herself.
If youâre interested (like I wasâI am paying that membership for this course precisely), head over here.
In Conclusion
Wow, thatâs a lot! Donât you feel better and energized by finding more about the Save the Cat! method? I believe it will help you like it helps meâtremendously, every day. Now I feel confident (or at least, less afraid) about my plotting skills, and I discuss the plot of my novels with others in a straightforward way. No more stuttering and losing myself in âmaybeâ or âI think theyâll do this, but Iâm not sureâ, etc. The doubts and hesitations about plot are easier to overcome.
I encourage you to try out this proven, successful method. Itâs highly rewarding.
Remember: trust your centre and have fun!
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I watch YouTube a lot (guilty as charged, dang) and love to learn through tutorials and how-to videos. I didn't venture into book reviews BUT Authortube caught my eye as an aspiring author myself… And I must mention Miss Kate Cavanaugh is my new obsession (Whoa! I mean in a "I'm watching all of her videos non-stop" and not like a creep, okay? Okay!)
Most importantly, she just saved my Heaven's Army: Down to Earth series with one of her methods.
How did she contribute to saving my cherished story?
And also, why do I appreciate Kate's videos so much?
I'll first list all her qualities and what makes her videos the best, in my opinion. Then, I'll introduce you to the specific video which helped me and what I realized and what I proceeded to do. Lastly, I'll explain how it works and what's new on the horizon for me and my story as well as this seemingly innocent technique. All interspersed with images and wishing Miss Cavanaugh the best (and please, do make other awesome videos so I can binge-watch them, oki-please??)
Ready?
What About That Kate Cavanaugh?
I'll be blunt here: her videos are the best and the most inspiring I've found because
* She's hilarious both in what she says and how she edits her videos
* She's so lively it's sweet and entertaining and cannot not move you into action (talk about motivational!)
* She finds different angles to tackle the eternal struggles for writers and explores various methods
* She has an amazing series where she writes like a famous author (using their own routine!) and it's both extremely funny and useful to see what works and how you can tailor it for you!
* She's honest and kind and enthusiastic
* Kate deals with writers's problems, her own progression, tips and tricks, "I tried writing like…", honest talks about writing and money (and so on), and amusing topics like "Sh*t writers thinks // Coffee Shop Edition".
If after such compliments you still don't want to take a look at her videos, you… Who the heck are you, then?! (Just joking. Nah.)
The Life-Changing Video
There is one video that affected me more than the others in terms of resounding with me and the potential technique. If there is one thing you need to know about me before I go into explanations, it's that even though I read eBooks and own three ereaders, paper is always the best (and it smells SOOOO enchanting).
So, what video am I talking about, the one that changed the course of my problems with Down to Earth and helped me beat writer's block with this story?
Well, here it is:
And the Lightbulb Was Turned On!
As for the issue with my story, I was stuck. The plotting never seemed good enough, and Iâd had terrible feedback and gratuitously mean comments. So, nothing I ever did worked (plotting and character-wise), and I was pretty hurt. So, sadness took over.
I spent months working this issue overâŚ. Okay, Iâm lying. Years. But then, a week ago I watched Kateâs video and it hit me!
I have to print the goddamn story like a book (or at least, as professional-looking as I could right now)! And I did. Like she says, it doesnât cost much (it was $32 for me at Staples) and it looks GORGEOUS what with those white spirals, protector sheet and hmmmmm all those sheets with written words on them. My words.
While itâs beautiful, do you want to know whatâs best about it?
It works!
The Innocent-Looking But Powerful Technique
It might not seem much and youâll probably go âWell,
You just had to print it to advance.ââ
But nah uh! Printing it out is only half of the issue solved. What makes it work is having it look professional and not just sheets you took out from your home printer and stapled together. The answer lies in its appearance and practicality.
Okay, sure, itâs easier to do with your home printer. But itâs less striking, and most importantly, less inspiring. And thatâs the trick. You need to hold your story (completely drafted or not) and feel closer to your goal. You need to look at it and go: âWow, I did that?!ââ With the protector, colour cover and spirals, youâll feel itâs going somewhere and, I hope, have your confidence renewed! Desire and drive to get somewhere with that story will come at your beck and call after that!
âBut what did it give you honestly?ââ
Well, since you asked, Iâll answer it in the next section!
I See the Horizon!(And Glimpse at What It Holds)
I envision my completed novel, at last. The feel of just-printed pages and the smell of just-fresh ink. And at last, written in big, bold letters at the very last page: "The End".
This might be in a little while, but now it's much clearer and tangible for me. I see and feel it. I *know* I will reach that vision.
And in the end, isn't it what counts?
Thank you so very much to you for reading and to Kate Cavanaugh for inspiring me with every upload. Please go and check out her channel.